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Needs major revision 1 2 3 4 5 Excellent writing

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Date: Monday September 19, 2005

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Where am I?

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Date: Sunday May 22, 2005

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Date: Thursday January 06, 2005

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groovy baby

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Date: Wednesday July 14, 2004

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Date: Tuesday June 15, 2004

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email: cookcomm@gte.net
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Date: Thursday October 23, 2003

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Hi Ken. Just checking links this week (I repaired 1,200). Also checking this feedback form. All the best to you from Daytona Beach!

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Date: Friday October 17, 2003

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You paint a very good picture in my head. Your choice of words very good. I hope your epic will get printed soon. good luck. Could you maybe ask a couple of people to rate my work The rize of Zakarian.

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Date: Tuesday April 08, 2003

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Dear Ken, You have written very well. I shall try and read the previous chapters and even visit your web-site right after this/later. Just one suggestion: Where you have written>>> is eager to come there, please think of amending it to .... is eager to go there/be there or reach there. -Taher

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Date: Sunday April 06, 2003

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This is a test!

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bulletDate: Wednesday March 19, 2003

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An impressive piece of work--the creation of a mythic world and its culture, peoples, and conflicts. It promises to be a work of epic scope in the Tolkien mould. Similar techniques in imparting an archaic flavour to the language.

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Most enjoyable! Thank you.

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