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The Curse of the Rose

By Kirby Killough

 

Chapter 1


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"And after you scrub the floors then wash the windows, dust the furniture, polish the pots, do the laundry, and then weed and water the garden" said Madame Josefine, the owner of Whistlewoods Mansion. "But you know that that garden is haunted.  I refuse to go anywhere near it. I would rather polish the bottom of your shoe for a week and a half then any more than take a look at that garden"Nelsie, Madame Josefine's maid, rejected. "Well then if you want to put it that way then you  may polish the bottom of my shoe after you weed and water the garden along with all of your other chores, now go!" she yelled back and Nelsie began out of the door. " I'll take care of the garden maam.  It isn't anything dangerous to me for I'm already wasted and meaningless. No curse worries me" said the new servant, Diana, whom thought that serving other people was the worst punishment in the world and I guess that I should agree with her.

     Maybe I should catch you up with the surroundings of this story.  This story takes place in the enormous Whistlewoods Mansion, which as I have already said, belongs to Madame Josefine whom owned thirty-five servants.  Each one of them cared for the other as much as you care for your parents and brothers and sisters.  Madame Josefine cared none for the servants because to her they were nothing but stupid people who did her every order and if didn't were severely punished.  Diana was most likely the most alert and interesting servant.  When she wasn't mourning on how horrible her life was she was hard at work singing her sweet, soothing songs.  Nothing other than herself seemed to bother her but that was probably because she had been captured from her home, which is completely leading me away from the story.  She had long, beautiful blonde hair and was the youngest, blue eyed beauty in the whole mansion at only the age of 15.  Nelsie wasn't as young, perhaps 40, and had grayish brown hair which she always kept in a neat little bun.  All the other maids were dole, and had no special qualities worth talking about so I shall move on.
    "Now Diana, I shall not have you taking up for everybody's job but as long as it gets done that I don't care who does it.  Now both of you get to work! " Madame Josefine answered and they both dashed off. Because Diana is probably going to do the most interesting thing than we shall follow her and speak of her findings if any.
 
    "My oh my, what a cursed garden!" Diana gasped as she approached the old dead pit of plants.  White lattice fences surrounded the whole garden and wild looking plants climbed it in a most disorderly manner.  Inside the garden was weeds, weeds, and maybe a few plants but because of the weeds you couldn't see them.  Old white wooden benches and tables were set in various places around the garden, most of them covered with dead ivy.  Cracked marble statues were set next to them and let you know that the garden used to be very beautiful.
    "I suppose that it would be reasonable to start unrooting weeds and then watering what plants there may be left" Diana said to herself and so she did.  The weeds were stably set in so by the time Diana was done unrooting them it was just about dark.  Even so, without even a mumble she wiped the sweat off of her face and went back to work watering. "Diana! Come on back now! Please! Diana!" Nelsie called from the doorway of the mansion. "Calm down Nelsie! I'm going to finish up and then I'll be right there!" Diana called back and did so. "If only I could have been an actress in a wonderful movie. Or a writer of a most splendid book.  Then I would have amounted to something but no. I am no more than a servant in a long dirty dress.  Uuuughh! If only" Diana murmured to herself as she walked upon the most amazing thing ever.
 
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