by Sandy Tritt
The comma appears to be a harmless little fellow, but
don't let appearances deceive you. Sure, the little guy never shouts,
never declares, never questions, never even finishes a sentence, for that
matter, but that doesn't mean he holds no power. In fact, he is the
hardest working of all the punctuation marks, the only one often appearing
more than once in a single sentence. He holds the power to change the
meaning of a sentence and to disrupt the flow of prose. Therefore, isn't
it time to give the little guy his due and quit misunderstanding him?
Here's his M.O. --
- Use a comma to separate the clauses of a compound
sentence connected by a coordinating conjunction (and, but, or, nor,
for, so and yet). The comma is placed before the
coordinating conjunction, not after. Examples:
- The students ate spaghetti for dinner, but no one
cleaned his plate.
- I gave three books to John, and John gave them to
- However, do not use a comma before and,
but, or and nor when they link pairs of words, phrases or
elements other than main clauses. Examples:
- The students ate spaghetti for dinner and cake for
- I gave three books to John and four to Nancy.
- The trick here is to recognize if the conjunction
separates a main clause (or major thought), or if it simply links pairs
of words or phrases.
- Also, the comma may be omitted in short compound
sentences when the connection between the clauses is close, such as:
- Justin stood in the corner and he watched.
- If the sentence is clearly understandable without the
comma, it is probably okay to omit it.
- The comma separates two or more adjectives modifying
the same noun if and could be used between them without changing
the meaning. Example:
- Janine pushed her long, straight hair out of her
- However, do not use a comma between unequal
adjectives or when an adjective modifies another adjective (instead of
- His coal black hair glistened in the brilliant
- The test is whether and can be substituted for
- The comma also separates the items in a list or a
- Jasmine visited the park, the museum, the court
house, and the historical hotel on the last day of her vacation.
- Note that the comma before the last item in the
series (the one directly before and) is optional. Also, note that
no comma appears before the first element in the list (the park), nor
after the last element in the list (the historical hotel).
- The comma is used in setting off transitional
expressions (however, regardless, of course and so on) from the
rest of the sentence. Examples:
- The weight of the ball, however, was greater than
the strength of the boy.
- Of course, we could have eaten after they arrived.
- Did he, after all, sleep in the den?
- The comma is used with introductory elements:
- No, he didn't wear a hat.
- Well, that was the just the beginning of my
- When the bell rings, the students race through the
- A comma sets off long phrases that precede a
- Before we could call Great Aunt Mary, we had to
locate her phone number.
- After listening to the forty-five minute sermon,
the children were in no mood for lectures.
Confused yet? Great! There are even more rules to
- The comma sets off words or phrases that rename
- John, my oldest cousin, loves to garden.
- Parkersburg, the third largest city in West
Virginia, has a population of 38,000.
- The girl, who had cried the day before, played
happily with the other toddlers.
- However, do not use a comma if the added information
is essential to the meaning of the sentence, such as:
- The song "Unchained Melody" melts my heart.
- People who dream in color are thought to be
- The girl who had cried the day before made
friends; the girl who had been friendly sat quietly alone.
- The test is whether the sentence makes since if the
renamed noun is removed from the sentence.
- A comma can indicate the omission of a word or words:
- To err is human; to forgive, divine.
- A comma is used to set off a word of direct address:
- Aunt Mary, this is my friend, Nathan.
- People, don't let this happen to you.
- Thank you, Wilma, for teaching me about commas.
- A comma is used set off a quotation from a dialogue
- He said, "I didn't do it."
- "I don't believe it," Jason replied, "but maybe if
you prove it, I will."
- "I don't believe it, either," Anna said. "Prove
- A comma sets off a tag question from the rest of the
- I didn't see it there, did you?
- That's the best movie of the year, isn't it?
- A comma also can be used to set off any sentence
element that might be misunderstood if the comma were not used, such as:
- To me, Millie would always be my best friend.
- Some time ago, Roxanne decided to become a dancer.
- And finally, a comma is used to set off a city from a
state, the year from a full date, a series of four or more numbers, and
to set off titles and degress from surnames and from the rest of a
- My children were born in Winneconne, Wisconsin.
- My oldest daughter was born on November 21, 1986.
- I wish my husband made $625,000 a year.
- My husband's full name is Sherden C. Tritt, Jr.,
although he goes by "Butch."
As you can see, the innocuous little fellow known as the
comma can be quite cantankerous. It's no wonder that comma usage is the
number one mistake I see on manuscripts I edit. Study this little
guy--once you've mastered him, you've accomplished a great feat. Good
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- Unlike most editors, I consider my role to be a mentor or a coach.
Instead of just telling you what is wrong, I explain how to correct the
problem, and I work with you to teach you how to write effective prose.
More than 50% of my business is repeat business, and I relish
establishing long-term relationships with other writers.
- Treat you with respect and compassion. All criticism will be of the
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- Mark your manuscript, correcting grammatical and spelling errors and
suggesting alternative wording where appropriate, line-by-line.
- Highlight areas that are especially well-written, so you will know
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- Where appropriate, offer suggestions for plot development, character
development or other areas that could be strengthened.
- Return a two-to-four page written analysis of your work. This will
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and any other areas particular to your work.
- If appropriate, recommend reading or resources to strengthen your
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