How do you present characters in your fiction stories?
Perhaps, as an ideal writer, the character descriptions just roll off your brain as you create the story.
Or, on the other extreme, do you just drop in notes on characters (if any) while you concentrate on story and action. (I confess - that is me. )
In the off chance that you have the latter tendency, how can you include effective character descriptions after the first draft is done?
Step One - Make a list of all characters.
And, above all, avoid the tendency to create characters who are all the same. Usually the same as you, the author. This happens a lot when a new author starts with fiction.
Step Two - For each one, copy paste the description you have into your list.
Step Three - Establish descriptions for your main characters. They need to be unique - completely different from each other. At least a paragraph.
Step Four - Drop in short descriptions for the others - also unique.
Step Five - work these into the place where each one enters the narrative, being careful to parse without distracting from the scene.
Step Six - this is important, not always done. For main characters, during the story, hint back to one or two main elements of that character's description. For example, instead of saying "She noticed a movement in the corner" try "Her dark blue eyes glinted toward a movement nearby."
Does this sound like work? Yes, but it's a requirement when you write an effective story.
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